A Letter to My Heart

Wrote this a week ago, I feel liek i had to post SOMETHING!

Dear heart, I'm not trusting you anymore.

These feelings inside of me, I'm trying to ignore.

It's not because of heartbreak,but about rejection.

I can never seem to make the right guy selection.

They're either jerks,taken or I can't see us together.

You should just behave, it'll make things better.

Today I was ambushed, seeing a guy in a new light,

Before I thought nothing,now i feel delight.

Now I want to wear his jacket and I thrive for interactions.

As of late, youv'e been getting the satisfaction.

I know he's not intrested, so give it up already!

It's time to be rational, so start beating steady.

Better yet, I'll start listening to my mind.

It's more capable of reality and it stays in line.

Author's Note

Rarely will I write anything pertaining to love,but this is something that's been annoying me for a while. Sometimes i really hate having crushes.

Reviews

[Alexis]

Augh, I totally understand what you're saying. Having a crush can be so ANNOYING. XD

Well, anywho, I like your rhyme scheme. All of the words fit it really nicely so it didn't sound forced.
You've written about such a known and understood topic, making it much easier for us all to get what you mean. It also makes reviewing a littler easier. :)
I don't always get why we fall for the people who are:
"either jerks, taken or I can't see us together."
It's so weird sometimes, but perhaps we'll never understand so there's no point in getting frustrated over it. ;)
I really like this poem! Great job. :D

[Knoxxeh]

Crushes can be like that you might like them and they might not like you back but giving up isnt the best option if you havnt even tried
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[Bailey C. Writing]

I like the rhyme scheme and you've related to a lot of the audience you're reaching on here :)
I agree about taking the periods off of the ends, but this is a good poem :) Good job

[GrownUpTime]

i liked this alot. it could use a few word changes to make it flow a little better but otherwise well written. a classic message.

[Kira]

Cliche, with forced rhymes and an overused message. The flow was ruined by the punctuation at the end of every line. Also, *interested and *you've.

[SilentDreamer]

Nice job, it flowed well. I liked the line "Today I was ambushed, seeing a guy in a new light." Every girl knows that feeling. :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

I feel your pain! I really liked this, I'm sure we've all felt like this at some point. :)