A Letter to My Heart

Wrote this a week ago, I feel liek i had to post SOMETHING!

Dear heart, I'm not trusting you anymore.

These feelings inside of me, I'm trying to ignore.

It's not because of heartbreak,but about rejection.

I can never seem to make the right guy selection.

They're either jerks,taken or I can't see us together.

You should just behave, it'll make things better.

Today I was ambushed, seeing a guy in a new light,

Before I thought nothing,now i feel delight.

Now I want to wear his jacket and I thrive for interactions.

As of late, youv'e been getting the satisfaction.

I know he's not intrested, so give it up already!

It's time to be rational, so start beating steady.

Better yet, I'll start listening to my mind.

It's more capable of reality and it stays in line.

Author's Note

Rarely will I write anything pertaining to love,but this is something that's been annoying me for a while. Sometimes i really hate having crushes.

Reviews

[Lexi I.]

Thanks for sharing this! If only our hearts would listen to what we told them! :)

One thing, I think you meant: "you've" and "interested"--two tiny spelling errors, thought you might want to fix those two.

[Daydreamer54]

Thanx 4 the review and I will
sure to fix my mistakes

[Lost in Wonderland]

Nice poem, The language and wording was perfect and very relatable. Well don!

[Mackenzie Brooke]

A very well thought out and meaningful poem. Always a good thing to let out you emotions once in while as a kind of self therapy.

[Shep]

Very strong and filled with emotions. Something that can take your breath away. Awesome write.

[khalid]

woww very nicely expressing the conflict between mind and heart which we all suffer. great poem although hearts are always disobedient!

[luna11]

Great poem!! :D
Sometimes when you follow your heart you end up doing something stupid. That's what happens to me. All the time!
You spelt interested wrong.
This is very well written. It has a great flow.
xx

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great title and concept, and I think you handled it well. "I know he's not interested, so give it up already! / It's time to be rational, so start beating steady". There is a playfulness, a certain sense of humor, to these words that I like a lot. Nice poem!

[Raindrop]

Those annoying 'crush' times! lol :) I'm all for 'follow what your heart tells you', but at times like these when you could get hurt....follow the mind! Great rhyming!

[Eileen]

I think there could be much more of a flow in your poem. It's very related but your rhymes are so unnartually added. Poems can be made without rhymes, just let it come naturally.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Great poem, love the flow of the rhyme.
Excellent!