Tired of Being broken

This is for all of those who have depression or ever had it. I hope this poem helps you, if not that, then the song I enclosed with it! If u don't like it, read my blog post about the poem!

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It's midnight and I'm in a pit of despair.

I'm wondering does anyone love me; do they even care?

I've been cut and bruised by people and life.

Should I end it all by the sharpness of this knife?

If i do such a thing, it'll all be in vain.

There would be no comfort just eternal suffering and pain.

I drop the blade and make my choice.

If I yell for help, someone must hear my voice.

I'm tired of being broken, tired of being bound.

This depression has really slowed me down.

I want to feel loved and happy again.

So please help me, my pieces need to mend.

 

Then I remember someone does care.

In his word he said he will always be there.

He said come all who are burdened and I'll give you rest.

He doesn't want us in this state, in us he sees the best.

I call for you Jesus, fix me and make me whole.

Send your angels to heal me and touch my soul.

Your words comfort me, I know you'll never lie.

 In the morning joy comes, and my spirits are high.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Jamison]

This was a good write. Even though I don't participate in religion myself, I think you showed what some people have forgotten: God is supposed to love everyone, no matter who they are or what problems they may have, even if they don't believe in Him. It's a beautiful poem, and I encourage you to keep up the good work (:

[Onyx_Rayne]

What a beautiful and inspirational write. Many times it only takes the slightest bit of encouragement for someone sufferring from depression...they just need to know that one person cares. Very nicely done :)

Also, that you for reviewing my poem "The Presence" - I appreciate it very much.

[deeps]

I can feel the powerful emotion in this write.

[Ima]

beautiful ......
an awesome piece of writing =)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a good poem for the depressed. I have depression so I know what it's like. I think you really captured the feeling lovely. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Leanne Conway]

I liked it.