Tired of Being broken

This is for all of those who have depression or ever had it. I hope this poem helps you, if not that, then the song I enclosed with it! If u don't like it, read my blog post about the poem!

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It's midnight and I'm in a pit of despair.

I'm wondering does anyone love me; do they even care?

I've been cut and bruised by people and life.

Should I end it all by the sharpness of this knife?

If i do such a thing, it'll all be in vain.

There would be no comfort just eternal suffering and pain.

I drop the blade and make my choice.

If I yell for help, someone must hear my voice.

I'm tired of being broken, tired of being bound.

This depression has really slowed me down.

I want to feel loved and happy again.

So please help me, my pieces need to mend.

 

Then I remember someone does care.

In his word he said he will always be there.

He said come all who are burdened and I'll give you rest.

He doesn't want us in this state, in us he sees the best.

I call for you Jesus, fix me and make me whole.

Send your angels to heal me and touch my soul.

Your words comfort me, I know you'll never lie.

 In the morning joy comes, and my spirits are high.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Jamison]

This was a good write. Even though I don't participate in religion myself, I think you showed what some people have forgotten: God is supposed to love everyone, no matter who they are or what problems they may have, even if they don't believe in Him. It's a beautiful poem, and I encourage you to keep up the good work (:

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

See i like the begining of this but in the second stanza you go to jesus not what i was expecting, and kinda turned me off on the poem. but other than that it is a good write and i can relate to the top part.

[Miele1228]

I realllyyyy like this. You entered it in my contest but i felt I should leave a personal note on it. God and Jesus will always be there so you never have to be afraid. Expect an award(:

[Ichthus Reality]

Absolutely amazing message :D I completely agree with you! Great stuff :)

[Stef Outsiders]

I'm a sufferer of depression and still am, but i find you're poem helpful and eye opening that i'm not alone. Being whether it's god or people who suffered the same, I don't know if i believe in god but i believe something is there. If others can fight it so can i!
brilliant poem though!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love tis poem! Just yeserday I wrote one On depression Called: Lost And Found! Yours Is so POWERFUL AND WRITTEN WELL! I,M a survior from depression myself!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Very deep and emotional. YOuar even further in your poetry thAn I was at your age. I have been there, to the
Pits of depression. I have felt your pain. Suffering from
Bipolar disorder for 9 years I have been to the point of
Suicide many times as well. But remember, the Lord loves
All of us, and we have to realize that to heal. Good job.

[just is]

This is amazing, i like this it's wonderful. I sure can feel this write.

[C.Elle]

Beautiful! Such true words. I think everyone feels like that at least once in their lifetime. Good job

[anonymously anisha]

I really really liked this! It was pretty dark at the beginning, but it ended on a happy note, even though it didn't have to. That was great

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

Lovely! It`s sad, but I agree with it. I`ve felt like this poem describes before.