Indescribable love

John 3:16

Indescribable Love

Your love for me is hard to explain

You came down to be poor leaving a throne where you rein

What you did no one else would have done.

To redeem us it had to take God's only son.

They beat you beyond recognition.

Through it all you stayed, because it was your mission.

On your head was a thorn made crown.

The blood you shed began to run down.

Thanks to yor blood my sins are washed away.

For that I thank you day after day.

Without you, the world would surely be loss

But, you made a diffrence when you died on the cross.

To people I give them this advice.

To never forget your profound sacrifice.

Author's Note

Feel free to leave any comments on how this poem makes you feel.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

Tommy is right!! He is risen!! And what a wonderful thing for Him to be. The whole world would be lost without Him. GREAT JOB__ IM ADDIN THIS TO MY FAVORITES!!!

[Tommy]

I will never forget His sacrifice, and I am so, so thankful for His gift; for "He is risen," and through this, I shall rise again too. What an Easter Inspiration!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful and inspiring

[Tallulah]

To people I give them this advice.
To never forget your profound sacrifice.
^ Beautiful line absolutely amazing advice. I love how you write about religion you certainly love God and want to bring His light to everyone you possibly can. I really respect you for that this piece is so amazing and heart felt and shows the whole world what Jesus went through for us. I thank you for reminding me of God's great sacrifice.
Much love,
Tallulah

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A beautiful poem you wrote .. truth and beauty in each word.
Thank for writing this ..

Peace
Chloe

[TransparentHearts]

This is incredible! Like. utterly amazing and I mean it. Absolutely gorgeous I didn't want it to end!

[maryjaneuy]

Wow. Very inspirational. I so love this! :)

[Chellie]

This was beautiful. I Loved it. It makes me feel inspired, and makes me want to read the Bible more often.

[Raul Moreno]

A very inspirational poem, a difference that cost him his life...nice work...Raul

[deeps]

to leave an answer would be holding the key for rightousness.
The knowledge would be the key or would it?
This is quite the profound write here.
I like this and I love your style.