Sweet Angel

Sweet Angel

A Poem by Hatchling

Where are you our sweet angel?

Are you hiding away from something?

Sweet angel are you waiting for the right time to say your goodbye?

Are you going to be okay?

Will you ever tell us that you are going to be alright?

 

When are you going to show yourself to us.

You are gone now but you are never forgotten.

We want you to have sweet dreams now sweet angel.

We can’t wait to see you again once more.

We will miss your loving smile and your sweet laughter.

Sweet angel you have a place in our hearts

You are a special person who has a place to fill.

We will always think about the good times we had with you.

We can’t wait to see you again sweet angel.

Rest in peace and fly easy our sweet angel.

© 2011 Hatchling


Author's Note

Hatchling
I wrote this peom because I have lost a classmate 3 weeks ago and I decided to write this so hopefully you will enjoy!!

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A tender sweet poem that touched my heart! Your friend/classmate is with God and the angels walking the streets of gold!

Excellent poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww, sweet. You must've really connected with your classmate. A fine tribute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm sorry for your loss. When I read this, it seemed like a mother's poem to a child. it's very comforting and tragic. I like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw... I'm very sorry about your loss, and it's heartening to see you express yourself with this lovely poem. (On a side note, I liked the font you used for this one.) Haha anyways nicely done, thank you for this sweet poem about a sweet angel! May he rest in peace!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww...I remember losing friends when I was young. Use commas and strategic spacing to phrase your emotions. Peace be with you

Posted 13 Years Ago


May your friend live forever in a precious heart like yours.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is awesome!
I loved the way you asked the question in the first few lines!
The ending it wonderful as well!
Great work! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 13, 2011
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