The ocean of tears

The falling tears are turing to an ocean

as I turn to look at the ocean of tears it starts to grab me and take me into its cold hearted hole.

 

I can't get out alone I need somebody to take a hold of my hand to pull me out. The falling tears are pulling me deeper so that I can't get out

 

somebody please pull me out of this cold hell.

The falling tears are not giving in.

Somebody Help me out of this hole

I need somebody to hold

Someone save me please!

Reviews

[Stef Outsiders]

i could feel the tensity in this.. as well as pain... its good piece... just let it all out... :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

nice poem. nice imagery here. ^^ so full of yearning, sadness and pain being expressed..

[MandaBear]

Thumbs up to you :P

[Bloody Ceca]

Nice wrote. I really like it ^^ Thumbs up to you :P