Hurting

The feeling of losing one's heart 

Is to hard to bear

Yet alone wondering in fear 

thinking what could happen

The perception of not being able to find the way 

To your happiness

Is like losing the one thing that matters most

The fear of never having anything

is much worse of a feeling  

Holding on to the past and 

Living in pain

Is not the way to find your way out

Of hurting

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

(Holding on to the past and Living in pain Is not the way to find your way out Of hurting) So very true. Your poem is very well written though sad...yet the experience of far too many I fear. I like your style! ~Sharon

[Buddhistboy73]

A true message for anyone going through heartache....as it's true..."the perception of not being able to find the way to your happiness" is kinda unsettling....

And then I enjoyed the final stanza of your poem...."Holding on to the past...."
True words well written here...:)

Thanks for sharing

BB

[Hatchling]

Thanks for the review

[David Scott]

The wisdom of taking risk with the timbre of youth in the voice.
A worthy risk to pen and post.
Nicely done.

[Hatchling]

Thank you David

[Lucifer Jones]

Very nice... A positive turn on heartache. Moving forward. Well done. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

[Hatchling]

thanks so much

[Bowers]

I truly loved this poem, your words spoke to me, and I dreaded the coming end, holding on to my past has dragged me under that pain and I'm lost, searching for that way out, and here you spoke the wonderful words, and I know I need to let go... so thank you

[Mr.Boffin]

great poem...great job agree 100%!

[Hatchling]

Thank you!

[Tania]

Great jobb!!! lovely work

[J. Kell]

Great write. I totally agree with the ending to this one...I think everyone can definitely relate to that at some point in their lives. Great words of wisdom. We all have to let go of the past.

[ron]

These are thoughts and feelings any one who has lost love and fears finding it again have. I know this all to well. Thank you for sharing Fluttershy.

[Ruth]

We all hold on, don't we? And yet, there is often a flash of light in our retrospect...lovely work x

[Hatchling]

Thanks for the review