The wolf moon

When the moon is out,

You can hear the wolves howl their 

song. 

Their song is beautiful with out words. 

Yet no one hears their song.

They just keep howling, until they are heard. 

With the moon shinning on them 

while they walk, alone wondering if they will be

heard 

When the moon is out keep an ear out

For their howls 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. I am a big wolf fan. Have a few of these myself. Maybe I will send you some out of my back pages. I have posted 40 plus pages since November, so easier than making you sift through ...

[Hatchling]

Thanks. Okay

[ron]

Beautiful. I have the wolfs howl, and have heard their songs.

[Hatchling]

thanks Ron

[ron]

Your welcome.

[Hatchling]

can you check out my newest poem please?

[ron]

Ok........

[Sami Khalil]

"When the moon is out,
You can hear the wolves howl their
song.

Their song is beautiful with out words. "

Very nice...:).................

[Mr.Boffin]

well done! enjoyed reading this one very much! love the imagery

[MandaBear]

Interesting write =) wolves do like to howl don't they? I guess they have a "howling" good time! lol (Yes that joke happened)

[Pryde Foltz]

You are never alone under the moon. Enchanting write.

[Hatchling]

Thank you ~ Fluttershy

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

I've always enjoyed anything with a wolf in the mix... this was a lovely piece.

[DogDrawler]

A beautiful masterpiece. :) I know how much you love wolves.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I think the concept of this one is quite nice. I like the idea of the moon and its relationship to the howling of wolves. You start of quite strong with the first stanza; it speaks clearly and deeply giving a good sense of your direction. I think there is a little lost in the middle two stanzas, as they oppose one another a bit...the wolves howl, but no one hears, but they howl until they are heard, which means that someone hears them. I'd just rethink the middle section a bit, perhaps a little tweaking in there would clear things up. Otherwise...great imagery and an entertaining write. Look forward to reading more from you.

[OctoberBaby]

Beautiful, simple, powerful. Nice work :)

[Hatchling]

Thanks OctoberBaby