Temporary place

Everywhere we go,

Is a temporary home.

Each place that we go to, 

Isn't where we belong. 

Going through doors 

just to get to where, 

we are ment to be 

No place is a permanent  one. 

We will soon find a place, 

That we belong in. 

We go through windows and rooms. 

Just to get to where we are going. 

Before you know it, we will have a

Place to call our own

Author's Note

I got the inspiration from Carrie Underwood's song Temporary Home. I hope you enjoy

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

the song lyrics were running through my head as i read. love how you incorporated the lyrics while still making t your own writing. great piece from a great song

[Hatchling]

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it

[lissalovesyou]

Wow, this is great! It leaves me wishing this poem was longer!

[Lucifer Jones]

Everywhere we go is a temporary home... I like the concept and the feeling of melancholy and unsettled movement. Very well done.

[Sami Khalil]

"Everywhere we go,

Is a temporary home.

Each place that we go to,

Isn't where we belong."

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

A lovely piece, though your words left me wanting more. Well done!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I like this alot. Soooo good...:)

[Hatchling]

thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[dw817]

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Well I certainly hope YOU'RE not a bit of a gypsy like this, Fluttershy ! It sounds awful. I know my Mom would go from one place to the next. I don't know how many places she's lived.

Me ? I lived with my Dad, then I got an apartment, moved from there to a mini-home which was sorta crazy, then I moved to another apartment, and finally here - where I guess I'll be from now on.

The poem is sad. It reminds me of this song - like you have nowhere to go.

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Here's hoping you are always within the safety and sanctity of the place - wherever it is - you call HOME.

[shallimarRose]

As soon as I read the very first line I was going to ask if you were listening to Carrie. Temporary home is one of my favorites. First line stanza four I think you meant permanent? xo Rose

[MandaBear]

Very good job and poem =) becca

[Hatchling]

Thank you sis

[Sunni Davis]

This is so beautiful with just a little, very subtle hints of sadness and longing. I love it! Very well written!

[Hatchling]

Thank you.

[Sunni Davis]

You're welcome :)