Finding myself

The loneliness is creeping up 

on me 

I have no where to go 

No one wants to get to know me 

I'm scared 

And  all alone 

Why can't people see 

Who I really am 

I am not trying to be someone 

I'm not 

I want people to see who 

The real me is

I don't want to hide anymore  

I just wanna be free 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

conveys despair and alienation. you express these feelings succinctly.

[Hatchling]

thanks for the review

[The Butterfly Writer]

Totally fits me. Love it :) So relatable.

[Hatchling]

Thank you for the review

[The Butterfly Writer]

No problem :)

[stephanie]

i love the poem, finding yourself, its a great poem, and it really relates to me and i know it does to others as well.

[Hatchling]

Thanks for the review

[stephanie]

your so welcome, you deserve it!!

[Sami Khalil]

"I am not trying to be someone

I'm not

I want people to see who

The real me is




I don't want to hide anymore

I just wanna be free "

A very powerful poem. You are so right. Acceptance of the self is the stepping stone to forgiveness of the self( Sami Khalil )
Bravo

[Hatchling]

Thanks for the review :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Hatchling]

:D :D :D :D :D :D

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :).............