Stories Untold

Stories Untold

A Poem by Hatchling

Stories untold

Stolen voices

Lives taken

Mysteries unsolved

 

Cold and Dark places

Vanishing without a trace

Not a soul to be found

 

Families hearts torn

No closure

Questions unanswered

Time moving faster

 

Weeks turning into months

Months taking on years

Stories unspoken

© 2013 Hatchling


Author's Note

Hatchling
hope you enjoy

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It kind of reminds me of a story I started to write. And of the show Bones. Deep and thought provoking though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very good :) kind of reminders me of the crime shows we watch on id channel

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gripping and well told liked it a lot

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow you are very talented:) love the message

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it
Well written! Powerful message throughout

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Thank you darling
Wonderfully written. A great message to the world. I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it
good poem, I like tension of each line! Wolflover, in the 6th line Vanshing without a trace
you mean vanishing.. Thank you for sharing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I fixed it the misspelling.
A great poem that speaks to the world. I loved it! :)

1000/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it
This speaks to me of those lost by years of war in some the countries in the world. Or perhaps POW's in general, the never ending wishing and hoping for a safe return. Each one has a story that remains shrouded in mystery.

A piece that really makes us imagine our own meaning behind it.
Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hatchling

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review

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