Darkside

He may seem to be quite the charmer

But that is what you see on the outside 

The man knows his ways to lure people in 

They don't realize it until it's to late 

His eyes tell the truth but you believe in the lies 

You better start running before he starts showing 

his darkside 

He is just like an evil dog that stalks his prey  

You may not see it now 

But you will see it soon 

He will find a way to make you believe that he wouldn't hurt you 

The man will be everywhere you go. 

He will begin to show his darkside at any time 

And at any moment 

So beware of who you choose

because they may have a darkside 

Author's Note

I know I haven't written in a while but I hope you like. I got the inspiration from Carrie Underwood's song "Two Black Cadillacs"

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Well done, I'm glad to have come across this piece... I've struggled with keeping my dark side at bay, so your words hit very close to home for me.

[Jesse Domingos]

it a good piece. it its self is dark. A smooth warning fear in each line. Make you wonder what brought this. i know you got inspired by a song, but if i didn't know that i would wonder what man. What past lover or boyfriend maybe even husband did you experience with or even seen in your life time. It puts a bad stain on men in general but its deep, dark and has even mystery. Great work keep writing.

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

This is a really good piece. Your writing flows and the red font leaves a great impact. Love your avatar by the way!
-Angelic Scorpio

[Hatchling]

Thanks

[DogDrawler]

Pawsome poem! You can get inspiration from anywhere.

[Faolan]

Awesome. I barely can even write a poem! I really mean it, your poems :)

[Hatchling]

Thanks

[Relic]

The world is full of him. Recognizing him is a learned art. Good poem.

[Hatchling]

Thanks

[hannah]

so very true. I like it!

[Hatchling]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[Sandie]

Very good. I really like it!!!

[MandaBear]

Very cool :) great write

[Mikey Industrious]

very good well written and i love how it sounds

[Hatchling]

Thanks bro