The Boy With The Ice Cream Eyes

The discription lies within the title

The boy with the ice cream eyes
                  He walks along
               Completely unfazed
       With alluding self confidence
             The crowd is amazed
               Who are the crowd
          And where are they going
                Who are the crowd
         And what are they knowing
              His eyes are so sweet
            But what is the flavour
                 Is he a boy-man
              Or is he our saviour
            With just one glance
          You could freeze or melt
              What was the odour
              That you once smelt

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

A very mysterious character in the poem. Who is he and who are those watching him and going along? that's the mystery in his poem. Could be a savior or someone leading you to your doom like the Pied Piper.

Very descriptive poem. To me it reads like a song an d I think it would make a great one. IVery well written poem and well worth my time in reading it and commenting.