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One day one the side,

You'll learn not to lie.

At least not to me,

For I am the you'll need.

I have showed you the way,

Now its time to finish my day.

When you reolize what you've done,

I'll already be done.

When you see,

That your eyes need me.

When you understand,

I'll always be your man.

When that day comes,

I'll be to far gone for you to find me.

Now that it must end,

You must see it as it must be

Reviews

[Ari]

I would suggest proof-reading this. You've got some spelling/wrong word issues, and you've left out at least one word completely, so that line doesn't make sense. Some examples: "For I am the ____ you'll need" "When you REOLIZE (realize)" "I'll be TO (too) far gone"

Otherwise, I like the sentiment here. Keep being strong, and keep writing.