Tin man

Dear Mr. Tin Man,

Sought for too long a beating heart,

that tears rust till you're no longer a movable part.

and you forgot that it is what lies within that sets us apart.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

very very good...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even the most feeling hearts often wish to be tin instead.
Nice piece...in line 3 did you mean "you're no longer"?

j.

[Wyrn Tiger]

where would we be without great reviews like this, thank you

[willweb]

Nicely said. If only most would understand this, there'd be no need for an oil can.