Fallen demon

I Need Not Know Nothing that I can't replace 

Sitting in Stillness, Same Stupor just different face.

A Damaged Demon Damned to walk among the human race.

Choking, Cloaked in Celestial star-lighted space,

not Flying but Falling at a Faster pace.

Wronged of my Wicked Wings, Waiting for the fall of the mace.

My last Breath Breathed, Breaching the Beauty within my Breast with tainted grace.

 

© 2020 Wyrn Tiger

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Wyrn Tiger

Oh how I've fallen from grace. I'm better at spelling, but worse at writing, time and practice will fix it. Oh how I've fallen from grace. I'm better at spelling, but worse at writing, time and practice will fix it. Rating /100

Wyrn Tiger

This one The lad fair this year 2st place 2019 This one The lad fair this year 2st place 2019 Rating /100

Amada

Amazingly written brother, keep it up Amazingly written brother, keep it up Rating /100

Onlyme

Wyrn this was an incredible write. I loved how you expressed it. And wrote it. Let alone how it sounds to read it out. And the images that come to my mind. Bravo. Wyrn this was an incredible write. I loved how you expressed it. And wrote it. Let alone how it sounds to read it out. And the images that come to my mind. Bravo. Rating /100 Wyrn Tiger 6 Years Ago Thank you!:) This is perhaps my best peace yet. Onlyme 6 Years Ago I have got to agree with you Wyrn this is exceptional. Wyrn Tiger 6 Years Ago So I came in second place in the lad fair my freshman year. do you think I can do it again this year with this poem? Onlyme 6 Years Ago To be honest, I would not be surprised in my own opinion if you came even first. This is deep, articulate, thoughtful, make you ponder and think. And insightful. Just a few things that spring to my mind. As a fellow human being reading it. But honestly. I really can't truthful say yes. As Am just me an average person who likes poetry. But these are my thoughts. Since you asked me. Hope it helps, in some small way. Dawn. Wyrn Tiger 6 Years Ago Thank you Dawn:) hearts and love from Wyrn. Onlyme 6 Years Ago My pleasure sweet. All I know Wyrn. I enjoy your poems. And think personally you are very talented. Wyrn Tiger 6 Years Ago so are you, don't forget that, we have nothing if not our own identity. Here I am an artist, spinning webs of pure gold with my writing but out in the real world? I am a socially awkward person. Onlyme 6 Years Ago But you are you Wyrn. We all have insecurities that make us human and vurable. None of us. Are perfect and never will be perfect. Appreciate yourself for WHO YOU ARE. A lovely person with a good heart, mind and soul. You are young. And will grow with age and maturity. Don't be hard on yourself. No one in real life face to face. Is 110% confident and if they say they are they are lying. Honest that is a fact. Everyone has their weaknesses and downfalls. Wyrn Tiger 5 Years Ago This got second place in the Lad fair 2019 View 9 more replies Wyrn Tiger 5 Years Ago Thanks for giving me the confidence to enter it. Onlyme 5 Years Ago Your very welcome. Told you were good. Congratulations on your win. hugs. Dawn. Wyrn Tiger 5 Years Ago thank you very much you too.

Reviews

[Wyrn Tiger]

Oh how I've fallen from grace. I'm better at spelling, but worse at writing, time and practice will fix it.

[Wyrn Tiger]

This one The lad fair this year 2st place 2019

[Amada]

Amazingly written brother, keep it up

[Onlyme]

Wyrn this was an incredible write. I loved how you expressed it. And wrote it. Let alone how it sounds to read it out. And the images that come to my mind. Bravo.

[Wyrn Tiger]

Thank you!:) This is perhaps my best peace yet.

[Onlyme]

I have got to agree with you Wyrn this is exceptional.

[Wyrn Tiger]

So I came in second place in the lad fair my freshman year. do you think I can do it again this year with this poem?

[Onlyme]

To be honest, I would not be surprised in my own opinion if you came even first. This is deep, articulate, thoughtful, make you ponder and think. And insightful. Just a few things that spring to my mind. As a fellow human being reading it. But honestly. I really can't truthful say yes. As Am just me an average person who likes poetry. But these are my thoughts. Since you asked me. Hope it helps, in some small way. Dawn.

[Wyrn Tiger]

Thank you Dawn:) hearts and love from Wyrn.

[Onlyme]

My pleasure sweet. All I know Wyrn. I enjoy your poems. And think personally you are very talented.

[Wyrn Tiger]

so are you, don't forget that, we have nothing if not our own identity. Here I am an artist, spinning webs of pure gold with my writing but out in the real world? I am a socially awkward person.

[Onlyme]

But you are you Wyrn. We all have insecurities that make us human and vurable. None of us. Are perfect and never will be perfect. Appreciate yourself for WHO YOU ARE. A lovely person with a good heart, mind and soul. You are young. And will grow with age and maturity. Don't be hard on yourself. No one in real life face to face. Is 110% confident and if they say they are they are lying. Honest that is a fact. Everyone has their weaknesses and downfalls.

[Wyrn Tiger]

This got second place in the Lad fair 2019

[Wyrn Tiger]

Thanks for giving me the confidence to enter it.

[Onlyme]

Your very welcome. Told you were good. Congratulations on your win. hugs. Dawn.

[Wyrn Tiger]

thank you very much you too.