The Single gunshot

The Single gunshot

A Story by Wyrn Tiger

A single gunshot echoed across the crestfallen night  sky. In a daze the soldier stood up from lying flat against a bare dirt hill. A heavy weight, an anchor of pain, was pulled off his back. All the pain and sorrow that used to reside on his shoulders was gone. It left his shoulders the same time the bullet left the barrel. Sorrow and steal entered the last guys head and the war was won, but to the soldier, the battle was not won. It was a war of life, freedom, family, chooses, but in the end it meant nothing. A single gunshot started it. A single gunshot ended it. The lonesome soldier look out onto a once grassy field and saw death and loss. Fallen comrades, foes and years of battle had turned the rich earth to red mud and the furtle grass yellow with death. The scene screamed silently with sorrow and field the soldiers soil with dread. The wind whistled the echoes of war cries that had died with the men who yelled them. The soldier added his cry before turning away. He couldn't go back. His town had been reduced to ashes and all that was left to ruble. He had nowhere to go. Nothing left to go back forward. His only thought was of onward and forgiveness.

© 2018 Wyrn Tiger


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The image stuck in my head like I was witnessed the post-war battlefield with those soldiers. The complicated and lonely feelings of being a warrior in the frontline are emotions that only they would truly know, and yet, you have described them thoroughly. May God bless them all and forgive them for killings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


so true.. I liked it very much.. you got an amazing way with the words, I enjoyed the descriptions..
feel free to send me read requests anytime

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wyrn Tiger

6 Years Ago

The beings of this story is actually the first story I wrote here. Its titled Marching
A.Tarek

6 Years Ago

Good title too.. but A Single gunshot is also an amazing title
Good choice
Wow, I love the usage of words. I love the way you made it seem real. The story is amazing. Keep up the amazing work.
#Cheers

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Wyrn Tiger
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