Flood

For hurricane victims

Washed away and gone. My old life washed away like sand in the river currents. Once a hand full of little rock's, memories, studied in detail, each as familiar as a voice from a close friend. Now tossed into a current moving faster then my thoughts could travel. My old life has been tossed into a blender of madness shredded and scattered into the abyss. My new life looks as bleak and ominous as what lurks beneath these calm dirty waters.

Reviews

[Ms Paragon]

Strong use of language and powerful imagery. Nice work!