The Forgottens

Torn,

ripped,

crushed,

burnt,

traped,

run over,

It's over.

Tired of being battered, beaten, punched.

My dreams have shattered, lost diamonds in sunshine.

Sick of being pulled down,

sunk,

ripped,

and shredded beyond recognition.

Just a fading scar people have forgotten about,

A scar too ugly to look at.

Well,

strike a match,

burn it down,

shout it out,

scream It out

because I’m coming.

I will not be forgotten.

I will rise and help others rise.

We are the forgotten

but now the unforgotten.

Reviews

[Zhavy]

Really enjoy your formatting, really adds to the experience. My only advice would be don't be afraid to come out of your comfort zone and really embrace word variation through the use of synonyms. Great job