Landlocked

on this kind of day i would want 
to go to the ocean.
gray, windy, chilly yet bearable.

the waves would be wave-y,
dark green & grey, cloudy,
like that day we swam in November and
the water was a warm summer storm.

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the sky is one color of slate white,
birds make sounds in the morning,
poking holes in the blanketed ceiling.

i hear the air, but i do not see it
whipping in the trees 
as it usually does when it sounds this way.

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[Justin]

that was really good, very descriptive :) great job :)