Unrecognizable

I see you now
But I can't figure out how
The person I once knew
Is now someone new
I remember your innocence
I cherished your unsullied soul
But now it's lacking of that same essence
Only filled with Coal
I had to check my list twice
Your name absent from the section of "Nice"
How many have you let in?
Unimaginable, your sin...
I loved you once upon a time
Fairy Tales: only worth a dime

I can't turn away
I won't let myself sway
I know you're still in there
Not completely consumed by the snare
I'll find a way to bring you back
Show you every moment captured by Kodak
You're not completely Lost
I'll love you, no mater the Cost

Reviews

[S]

Thats the beauty of time , it transforms everything and everyone. People can either grow in relationships or realize that they are not partner material. But change is for sure. Good or bad, they evolve with time. You have very beautifully captured the emotion. Good rhyme.

[Taurean X Hunter]

Beautiful poem! I love your rhyme scheme very cool.

[Ashira Macy]

I like that you bring some Santa lines into this, I don't think I have seen anything like that before. The content of this is very easy to relate to. I really enjoy the fact that you don't give up on the person in the end though, you still want to fight to bring back their old self. That is very admirable.

[Lyan]

What a great write! Really enjoyed reading it because I felt it to be relatable. Hopefully it turns into happiness instead of bittersweetness. Great piece!

[micky]

Awesome PIECE. Tells the tale of life itself. Well done Joey

[Lisa]

Cast out and fallen. What a tale of love lost. Spectacular write, Joey!

[yuki]

aww so cute :) lots of feelings to this and can tell your trying to find her even if shes someone who change you know shes there nicely done :)