Whenever you're ready

Whenever you're ready I'll be here
I still love you my dear
I don't care what you've done
Mistakes, we've all made some
I'm not focusing on your past, not anymore
I just want you to walk in my door
I must admit
Cheesy is what I'm trying to hit
But if this makes you smile
please, come over for a while
We never finished Dexter
but that's okay
I don't care
All it was
Was an excuse
Something to get your smile back
Something I never want to lack.
My door is always open
The light stays lit
So if these words I've spoken
Compel your heart to split
I'll be happy
Just to know I can still make you feel Sappy :)

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

Aw!!! This whole poem oozed sweetness. I liked the part about Dexter, and how you just wanted her to smile. So lovely. One thing though, the "your" in the title and first line should be "you're". Keep writing, I loved it!

[Beau Radd]

This is really good. Really.
Relatable, in a sense, too.
Very nice

[Dee]

Beautiful poem Joey, open and emotional, with a good flow and clear imagery..
Bravo....Smiles...Dee.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful, sappy and fun. :)
Lovely love poem.

[Rene Salinas]

First off then I struggle with the small font I am not even that old but I had to force my eyes to read. I was left with the impression that the one desired was still engaged in some kind of amorous entanglement and she couldn't free her heart to make it available for the one that so clearly is eagerly waiting. That feeling is a thinking onto itself , expectant yet not forcing. I am not sure that either line to be found with words like cheesy and sappy are contribuiting to the feeling already mentioned. That is just my view thought. You are the writer and if those words make you happy so be it.

Thankyou

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

I thought this was actually sweet- good write

[Joey]

It was a sappy, like that butterfly feeling you get inside you :)

[yuki]

very nice poem love is definitely there :) one thing im not sure of is you actually meant ''sappy'' or ''happy''. other then that this is a great poem :)