I Hate You

I Hate You.
I Hate You, I Hate You, I Hate You
I Really Do Hate You
I Hate your gorgeous smile, I hate your cute laugh, I hate your perfect hair
I hate the way those eyes of yours stare
I hate the way you kiss my lips
I hate the way you hold me
I hate the way we used to mix
I hate that it's just me
I Hate the way you used to Love me
I hate this distance between us
I hate this time apart
I hate that your so far
I hate that you walked away
I hate that I couldn't make you stay
but most of all
I hate that I don't hate you.
Not Even At All

Reviews

[misha]

This is a sad piece. Love can be so fickle and it can break our hearts. I can connect with this piece. You feel like you should hate them but you are too in love with them to hate them for what they have done. A little piece of you will always love them. This was such a truthful write.

[F. Barium Deus]

Ah! The conflicts of love and relationships. Indeed, it has been said that love and hate are closely related, although in the case of your poem the character recognizes that hate masks his true feelings. Insightful poem!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Sad piece, very emotion , great job :)

[wordiggerone]

Very powerful emotion, Joey. May be Love is imagined as a child because of this quality in the emotion. Zipped me years back. Kudos!

[Joey]

Thank you for your feedback :) I'm glad I'm able to project and communicate my feelings with everyone well enough for you guys to understand :)

[Matching Socks]

Well, it sounds like you're in love to me. :)

[yuki]

wow this is great I really like this great job :)