Id, ego, Superego

Id, ego, Superego

A Poem by Joe Gibson
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A friendly conversation

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Oh Boy


You sure this is safe?

Probably not billy

ok, sweet

No, don’t listen to that white cloaked goodie two shoes

shut up you red t**d

ok boys, relax for the love of go-

DON'T YOU DARE SAY IT

god

haha he got you good lucifer

shut up gabe, i oughta come over to the other sides of his shoulder and stick this pitchfork right up your a-

oh, ok tough guy

will both of you shut up before I brush you both off

gabe started it

did not

did too

SHUT UP

don’t have to be so harsh bill

yea bill, slow yo’ roll bruh

bruh

bruhhhhhh

  1. . . you two about done yet?

just about

haha wouldn't be the first time you finished early

bite me you halo wearing heathen

I WILL SMITE YOU
DO IT, NO BALLS

sigh

ok, ok whats was your question again kid?

oh shmoop, yea what did you have a conflicting thoughts about?

  1. . Do you think this sandwich is safe to eat?

Probably not

Yolo

sigh, this is so much cooler in the cartoons.  




© 2014 Joe Gibson


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Ha! I love the ending ;) This reminded me of a Psychology class I took. We watched a very awkward and disturbing video about the Id and the Superego - I'll never be able to seer that movie out of my brain.....Anyway, love this! Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! kind of a Trilogue here!
Nice poem and good experimenting!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 30, 2014
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Joe Gibson
Joe Gibson

North Attleboro, MA



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