My Everything

short poem, I jumped out of bed to write it :P. Hope you enjoy it/can relate to it. please review haha

Music is my everything

the way it soothes my soul

Sounds rippling through the once still room

and catches like fire on coal

 

Music in my head, my thoughts

it sends my soul adrift

My breaking heart is healed again

and I feel that exhilarating shift

 

I watch in a dizzied daze

the notes cascade around me

And the contents of my teeming mind, spill out

Music is my key

 

 

 

Reviews

[Savannah(:]

Very deep and Alluring(: So many people can relate to this in so many ways, and it is exquisitely written, highly inspirational(: Nice flow(: Great job!

Oh my GOODNESS. SO TRUE.

[Aggie Skeleton]

Great write, music keeps evreything going. Without it, we're crap on legs.

[FocusedAmnesia]

I love this, and is pretty much me in a nutshell. Reminds me of my favorite quote: "M|U|S|I|C; the only air I breathe"

[SilentDreamer]

Wow, I can so relate to this and as you can image a lot of people can as music is something people love. It flows well, and is descriptive. Awesome job.

[dreamer :)]

I can completely relate to this!!! It's SO amazing! I found myself really indulged and transfixed on this piece!

[KaySea]

this describes me alot. i love it

[Brandon]

fantastic this is exactly how i feel sometimes and this was beautiful



100/100

[Onyx_Rayne]

Excellent! What a fun, inspirational write. Music is an outlet for so many people...so many things... music is truly magic in it's abilities.

The structure and flow of this piece is great... Overall, it's a great, uplifting write.

Fantastic work :)

[R E Tree]

I'm a big music fan and I can definitely relate to this poem. As I get deeper into the peom I learn more about you and your opinions on music. I like your writing style and I enjoyed this as I have always wanted to write a poem about music but I couldn't think of a way to start it. I find this inspiring and a poem to remember