Moon madness

The bustle of human life starts to become muffled

and then is muted altogether

Quiet

All form of sound is swallowed into a gaping abyss of silence

The constant chatter of daytime abruptly lost in the void of night

Bliss

The feeling of complacency crashes over me in tremendous waves

And I allow this primordial embodiment of silence to take control

Silence

Stars overhead, like fine holes being poked through the fabric of the nighttime sky

The almost mournful, milky light of the full moon encasses the world in a silver film

Ecstasy

Mind meshing with the very essence of the night

I spin in endless circles, barefoot in the cool grass, rejoicing in the hypnotic silver light

Realization

As the silvery light dissolves into nothingness, it is replaced by the peachy rays of dawn

And I come to the understanding that my peaceful moment of silence and repose

 

Is over

 

 

Reviews

[kuru]

simple yet powerful ...love the thought process each line is a different thought like our mind, chattering away...and the imagery is lovely
"Stars overhead, like fine holes being poked through the fabric of the nightime sky
The almost mournful, milky light of the full moon encasses the world in a silver film"
Ecstasy

One of your best.
I like the structure.
A simple little moment,
blown up to something big and important.
Very good.
No, fantastic. Peaceful.

[KaySea]

very impressive

[Brittany]

Soo good as always.I don't think you understand how good you are.

[nono]

Really cool, Beautiful. LOVE IT! I love the moon so this is probably my fav poem by you.

[.]

wonderfully expressive, there is something magical about the night sky..great writing

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This was a great write, I liked the lines- "The almost mournful, milky light of the full moon encasses the world in a silver film." I feel like this has a very "dreamy" feel to it. The madness in silence, I do believe, is captured in this piece. Thanks, and keep up the writing! :D

[Liz-z]

It was amazingly beautiful...
"Quiet
All form a sound is swallowed into a gaping abyss of silence
The constant chatter of daytime abruptly lost in the void of night
Bliss"
Amazing and very well written.
"Mind meshing with the very essence of the night
I spin in endless circles, barefoot in the cool grass, rejoicing in the hypnotic silver light
Realization"
Amazing, favorite line for sure! :D

[dreamer :)]

That. Was. BEAUTIFUL! :) I really loved it!!

100/100

[Love Is Dead]

"The almost mournful, milky light of the full moon encasses the world in a silver film

Ecstasy

Mind meshing with the very essence of the night

I spin in endless circles, barefoot in the cool grass, rejoicing in the hypnotic silver light

Realization

As the silvery light dissolves into nothingness, it is replaced by the peachy rays of dawn

And I come to the understanding that my peaceful moment of silence and repose



Is over"

amazing! i love that whole phrase...i can read it a million times!