A Reason

The poem i wrote for my first love.

The meaning of my existence was unclear,

this much is true.

 

Until I found a reason to live, and that reason;

is you.

 

I have seen views that would take a man's breath,

yet not mine.

 

You are the most beautiful thing I've seen,

and will be for the rest of time.

 

Even if I wanted to forget you,

I couldn't you see.

 

As you've now replaced where my empty heart,

used to beat.

 

Thankyou my love who now is to me a nessecity,

much like each of the seasons.

 

For giving my life point to go on,

for giving me a reason.

 

 

Author's Note

Be brutal guys :)

Reviews

[MOON]

Lyrical write sings!

[Joe Morris]

Thanks for review :)

[Mia]

You said be brutal...so I must be honest with you, I completely agree with T.R.P. This is beautiful and the lady that inspired this is truly lucky. To have something this wonderful written about you, sigh. I hope you’ve showed it to her! Incredible, absolutely incredible.

[Joe Morris]

Thankyou ever so much!

[The Refined Poet]

If that wasn't a clear, well written expression of love, I don't know what is! excellent write!

[Joe Morris]

Thanks T.R.P :)

[afra]

such a lovely write ....well done

[Joe Morris]

Cheers :)