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A Poem by Miss Chriss

Sitting at a table in the corner,
All by myself. all alone.
Thinking about life,
How many things I've been shown.

Can't trust many people
they use, lie, cheat, and steal,
Wish I could find someone,
Just anyone who's real
.

I've got many friends,
but that isn't enough.
I know I should stop looking,
Just want to be loved.

Loniness is so painful,
and hard as can be.
I'm trying to be a trooper,
and be independant and free
.

When will the pain end,
and go away forever?
I guess when I find what Im looking for,
and when we are finally together

© 2009 Miss Chriss


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Wow! this is awesome, well penned and thought provoking...believe me the theme is very relative, we have all gone through such situations at one time or the other. i love the fond style as well as the color, it made the piece appealing and pleasant to the eye..............regarding the title i could have given it "where are you?" but the untitling of the piece in itself is a style as it leaves the reader to think of one...wellldone and welcome to the site.

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Wow! this is awesome, well penned and thought provoking...believe me the theme is very relative, we have all gone through such situations at one time or the other. i love the fond style as well as the color, it made the piece appealing and pleasant to the eye..............regarding the title i could have given it "where are you?" but the untitling of the piece in itself is a style as it leaves the reader to think of one...wellldone and welcome to the site.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Miss Chriss
Miss Chriss

Spartanburg, SC



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Lets see...I'm 25 years old from Spartanburg, SC. Love to write short stories and poetry. Check out my stuff and lemme know what u think... more..

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A Poem by Miss Chriss