The Inside Outsider (not final)

The Inside Outsider (not final)

A Book by Joel O. Mclean
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Charlie, an outsider has recieved an invitation to step foot in the central district. The first outsider to ever do so. What would he achieve, what would he see?

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© 2012 Joel O. Mclean


Author's Note

Joel O. Mclean
It is very much a work in progress, I only have done one chapter and would like some "constructive criticism". I would like to know if I have achieved my aim of making you want to continue.

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Joel O. Mclean
Joel O. Mclean

Bradford, West Yorkshire, United Kingdom



About
I hit sixteen half a year ago (speaking in 2012, February), and have attempted to write my own novel/book for a while now. You could say my main interest is computers, most notably the programming sid.. more..

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A Chapter by Joel O. Mclean


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A Chapter by Joel O. Mclean