The Inside Outsider (not final)
A Book by Joel O. Mclean
Charlie, an outsider has recieved an invitation to step foot in the central district. The first outsider to ever do so. What would he achieve, what would he see?
© 2012 Joel O. Mclean
Author's Note
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It is very much a work in progress, I only have done one chapter and would like some "constructive criticism". I would like to know if I have achieved my aim of making you want to continue.
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Added on February 26, 2012
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Joel O. McleanBradford, West Yorkshire, United Kingdom
About
I hit sixteen half a year ago (speaking in 2012, February), and have attempted to write my own novel/book for a while now. You could say my main interest is computers, most notably the programming sid.. more..
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