A False Illness.

My short first attempt at poetry.

 He needs to break out of his shell

 Be cured of his disease

He needs to change his lifestyle 

To put our minds at ease

He needs to conform to us

He needs to change what he believes

He needs to see exposure

With his comfort we don't agree

He needs to be torn from this state

Its for the best and he will come to see

He cannot be who he is 

But what we say he needs to be.

Author's Note

This is my first attempt at poetry so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Be harsh I promise you wont hurt my feelings :)