Temple

Temple

A Poem by Dorian

When I saw you,
I realized I was dead.
Such beauty can only exist in heaven .

Your words are different from everyone else's.
You seem to have memorized all the songs in the world.
You are like the main character of all love stories.

You carry both,
the innocence of a child 
and the lust of a woman.

Your body is my temple,
Let me worship you.

© 2025 Dorian


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Emotions in this poem is beyond words. Great poem

Posted 5 Days Ago


Dorian

3 Days Ago

Thank you!
Intense in its romance and desire.
Lucky you found her.
Enjoy the relationship!

Posted 5 Days Ago


Dorian

3 Days Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

3 Days Ago

You are surely welcome.
Oh, Dorian, such a beautiful tribute to your lucky lady.
There are no words to describe how completely you cover her.
I mean, you died and she was there.
She is in every song. Every love story.
She is innocent and wanton. If I could meet somebody to allow me to love him to the fullest.
But guys either want a s**t or a matron. Never both. Females like freedom to be who they want to be.
You worship her. You're a good guy. I'm sure she covets you.
Excellent write!

Posted 6 Days Ago


Dorian

6 Days Ago

Thank you very much for your sincere comment. I am lucky to have her. I'm not sure she understands b.. read more

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