story of a broken soul

rhyming for once

the darkness inside is eating my soul

the fear so cold hides inside its hole

breaking me down , chewing,spitting me out

no space to breath so no chance  to shout

black tears run down my face and hate trys to escape

as i clime the steps i know its to late

and now as my shallow life comes close to the end

this noose round my neck is my only true freind

Author's Note

i promised soul writer this poem
devoted to all the amazing artists on here

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

Very dark write , I liked it alot. I loved your imagery my favorite lines were " Black tears run down my face,and hate trys to escape as I clime the steps I know its to late"
You can feel the inner turmoil in this piece its really lovely, from start to finish I think this was a great write.

[Soul Writer]

Yes! I remember this! Oh so glad I finally see the rest and not just the last two lines! Thanks Joel :)
It's very sad, moving :( Well done.

Soul Writer

[theunknownchick]

Good Job. I like it

[Ben]

Very good.