The Real Taste of the Forbidden Fruit

The scented candle melts,

Its flame can be felt;

Heat crawls, desire grows,

Sweat drips as curtains fall.

Their hands seem uneasy,

They touch exploringly,

Caressing each other's body,

Baring each other totally.

His dry hardness plunges

Into her moistened softness -

Pussycat meets cockatoo,

They're now one, though they're two.

As one, they dance with the groove

Which gets faster as they move

Until he reaches his limit

And ends the dance with his vomit.

One, again, becomes two

Few minutes of fun is through,

The dance they had brought pleasure

But what's at stake's their future.

Indeed, they're young and free

Yet both are not happy;

Who were once one - he and she -

Are burdened 'cause now they're three.

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol :) love this piece Sir Joe. Can't find perfect words to explain this poem aside from brilliant and amazing. This is insanely beautiful. Love the progression and quirkiness of this story. It is cool. Thanks for sharing.

My Fave:

His dry hardness plunges
Into her moistened softness -
Pussycat meets cockatoo,
They're now one, though they're two.

[Sir Joe]

Thank you so much for reading this piece, Sir Marc. I'm so happy that you liked it!
Well, that's also my favorite part of the poem and in the actual act. LOL hahaha just kidding!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol :) Welcome Sir Joe, I enjoy reading your work.

[Sir Joe]

I'm delighted. =)

[kayla]

Wow. I absolutely love this. Extremely well-written, and it's obvious that you put time into it.

[Sir Joe]

Thank you so much (=

[Ceri]

Haha. Here I was, reading the first couple stanzas, thinking it was going to be totally subtle and suggestive, and BAM, "His dry hardness plunges/ into her moistened softness". Another eye-widening read. The twist at the end was interesting too, completely changed the tone of the poem. The use of "vomit" in the fourth stanza was clever also, you're always keeping the reader on their toes! I love how unpredictable your writing is.

[Sir Joe]

Thank you very much Ceri for that wonderful comment. (=

[candaceflynn]

i laughed at the ''pussycat meets cockatoo'' line. and this is a great poem. applies to all exploring teenagers nowadays.

[Sir Joe]

thank you very much! (=

[candaceflynn]

anytime fellow filipino! :)

[Sir Joe]

oww, i didn't know you're also a filipino (=
thank you so much again (=