let me be

why must i have a felling for evrey thing.

why cant i just be.

i,ll be ok if you leav me to think in my on little box

of imagination dreaming of waters filled with rocks.

i promise i will hold my self high if you let me dream of roses and sandcasels.

i'v looked in the mirror and have not known what is looking at me.

so just let me be.

let me day dream let me think i will figuer it out.

let me run through fildes let me dance in the rain just leav me to be.

and let me see. 

let me sit in the ocen and play make believe. 

let me be diffrent  and sing off pitch as loud as i can. 

let me be paint my face.

let me scream at myself. 

let me be. 

Reviews

[Cylis Derrens]

Great potential in this poem. I see a lot of promise in it.

[lori c]

this is wonderful, a plea for something each one of needs and wants. your images are of aloneness but not loneliness. of childlike freedoms. i have to admit the teacher in me wanted to fix it up (spelling/typos etc.) but the artist in me said doncha dare. it's much more vivid just the way it is. i won't attempt to choose a favorite line cause i feel it all works together. well done.

[Lorraine Pearson]

Oh how I can relate to this one...this is an honest write and you've put it together really well. Its sweet, and vulnerable. Sometime alone time is not seen as a necessity, and yet it is many times the key to one's sanity.
~Lorraiyne