factor

factor

A Poem by jodi sharp

factor

A factor is - anything that contributes causally to a result; "a number of factors determined the outcome.

Aka  things that happen that makes are life go down the crapper.

What was the factor that made my husband cheat ?

What was the factor that made my daughter be bulimic?

What was the factor that made my brother die ?

What was the factor that made my father leave?

What was the factor that uprooted me.?

What was the factor to make her boyfriend beat her up?

What was the factor that made them hate them self?

What was the dame factor that made him get bashed?

Is that really what we are calling it now a factor, does that one little thing really hurt use so bad?

© 2008 jodi sharp


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Very well written. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


powerful writing. It is amazing the emotions you can get out of one word.
I pointed out a few typos. I hope that you do not mind.

"Aka things that happen that makes are life go down the crapper."
Should be 'our life'
"Is that really what we are calling it now a factor, does that one little thing really hurt use so bad?"
Should be separated into two sentences. Plus I think that you meant 'us' not 'use'.

"That was the*** dame*** factor that made him get bashed?"
Was that intended to be a different word?
Thank you for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The word also means a person who does things for another person or an organization. So you could say, we collectively 'factor' into the make up of the WriterCafe.

Great spontaneous write. I hope the contents are not based on personal events. If so � you have my prayers! A worthy contest entry.

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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