Without a Sail

Image by: Kristopher Raphael

I’m just sitting here like a ship without a sail

waiting on a wind but to no avail

this ocean I think I’m cursed

who knows maybe you’ve got it worse

I’m just drifting through the sea without a trail

High tide, moon rise, pull me in the right direction

Stars unlined, to this heart of mine, waiting on loves connection

Forever is nothing but blue

A life where there's no me and you

I envy the water that can kiss the sky's reflection

Author's Note

Just the beginning of a poem. Looking for feedback on how to improve it and where to take it from there. Would love the feed back thanks:)

Reviews

[steph]

This is Terific so far, The picture your painting is warm and Romantic, and I can envision the scene unfolding.. Still needs more, The Poems Stops abruptly, Howver you said you were'nt finished. All in all I will await in anticipation for the conlusion For I am sure This will be added to my favorites... Excellent read...