opaque

reality shock compromise

sickness ensues and suffer pity

mortification of paradise a lie

sympathy does not rest easy

as dunce is a mask i portray

evasive untransparent  defensive

switch twist rebuke upon my sanctity

doubt confusion,  face i no longer fathom

do i wait for the vehemence or cease?

fortitude, true friend despite reprocutions

as preventing petals being plucked from a flower

at risk of fury destroying your wings

obeisant i respond to the shake of your head

solicitous heart in petrified coma

created convienience is the armoured path i follow

bottled silence, corked hysteria, robotic routine

formed at your expense and degredation

numb yet mine and only mine is the valve of release

blinkered pendulum swings to my tune

 

Reviews

[Vyctm]

You have a large vocabulary. I had to pull out a dictionary for half of the words. The flow was very interesting. The only thing I would do is find words that are more common knowledge.