tubeway

a thought in the morning

pictures flashing by

i contemplate my future

from whence i came to where i reside

still inside , inertia jerks

what is this journey?

all be it inevitable

bold coloured lines , no cheer, sheer  drudgery

faceless bodies withdraw and shut down

warm inside stuffed into the corner

await freezing white light

what has changed in me through this passage

am i the same?

one woman in , another out

each side a different lifetime, a choice

but which to choose

which is real , which is me, which is sane

maybe i dont want to rest

forever split

an unstable nucleus remains within

my pale now silent guise

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

You have captured the confusion that can be inside as we discover ourselves....great art.....my favourite line "I contemplate my future from whence I came to where I reside." This line shows completion..inclusivity...none is left out....this is a great piece

Best regards,
Vincent