I want to fall in love with you

My crazy love life abroad...tsk.tsk.tsk.

I'm always unlucky in love,
I always fall for the wrong person,
And hurt the one who really loves me.
But now...I feel easy to moved on.
Maybe my heart becomes so numb,
Or I become expert fixing it on my own.

I learned a lot from my last relationship,
I commit myself to her but it's a big mistake.
Love can't bloom and flourish so fast then shine,
Especially when love is formed online.
It takes time, and friendship is the best foundation.
True love is made of time, effort and dedication.

I'd known someone who's perfect for me,
My eyes and brain are one and in unity.
But my stupid heart was indecisive that day,
I let her slipped away.

Author's Note

Please critic my poem, especially if you notice some grammar ertors. So that I can improve my work. It's highly appreciated.xoxo

Reviews

[QueenYuli]

Wow, I feel you! It's really good, but it doesn't really convey your feelings... Sort of. Like, I've also recently broken out of a friendship, so... Yeah. It's pretty good. Keep it up! ^^