14

14

A Poem by Drifter


It’s the 14th day,
I put on a smile,
True emotion stays inside.

I’m too weak to admit,
There’s something still left,
But I’m much to stale to cry.

I’ll laugh for awhile,
Dance the same dance,
And sing the same old song.

If just for a second,
I’d like to pretend,
You’d come back and sing along.

My hopes are too high,
I’ll fall to the ground,
My face covered in mud.

The mud is my shame,
Broken back is the pain,
Of not falling out of love.

© 2012 Drifter


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'...I'm much too stale to cry..'

'...Of not falling out of love.'

From first to last, each line speaks of the experience, succinctly. ~pat

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

does it really hurt to fall in love? just wondering...
your poem can make someone heart's heavy... I can feel the hurt..
but I sympathize with the narrator but I cannot understand his feelings that much...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Drifter

12 Years Ago

It doesn't hurt to fall in love; it hurts when you can't move on even when you know you should. I'll.. read more
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

oh... I'm just wondering... I'm too young to be in a relationship actually... thank you for replying.. read more

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Drifter
Drifter

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Hello. I am 17 years old and I live in a suburb of Phoenix, AZ. I don't know what people think of Arizona, but it's hot enough to sunburn the fair skinned kids after just a few minutes outside. I'm.. more..

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A Poem by Drifter