I SEE

I see a girl standing in front of me,

Staring at me.

Those eyes that reflect nothing but wonder,

But with a lips that are pursed with sorrow.

I see her hair, 

Sevenfold longer than mine.

Those black in tip-top shaped strands

Rest perfectly on her breasts.

I see her skin,

That glows from the rays of light.

Porcelain white skin

That everyone loves to have.

I look back to her eyes,

The eyes of a young girl,

Who wanted to have all the love in this world.

Became who she desired to be.

a.p.

Author's Note

I DO NOT OWN THE IMAGE
img originally from:
http://favim.com/source/g-o-f-f.tumblr.com/

Photoshopped.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sometimes when we see ourselves as someone different from the past or present, there's a little joy and success we can feel. After all the pains and sorrows we have, the future still have its promise of a change...

Nice piece, Kabayan. Happy writing!

[aacpuente]

Thank you kabayan!

[Pryde Foltz]

I see her hair,
Sevenfold longer than mine.
Those black in tip-top shaped strands
Rest perfectly on her breasts.

Beautiful and well-penned.

[aacpuente]

Thank you so much Ms. Foltz

[Pryde Foltz]

You can call me Pryde:)

[Pax]

ahh, the introspective approah in looking thyself. In here I see a step on someone else's shoe, or an artist who achieved fame. :) wonderfully done, kabayan :)

[aacpuente]

Thank you for the time you have spent in reading this poem, such an honor.