the one where i hide my feelings behind a mundane observation...
A Poem by
Jeff Loquist
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you know that sock hole... the one your big toe pokes through... always on your mind
© 2011 Jeff Loquist
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ahh cleverly impressed~
Posted 13 Years Ago
is anything truly mundane? especially from the porthole of observation .
Einstein didn't wear socks for that reason ..
Posted 13 Years Ago
is anything truly mundane? especially from the porthole of observation .
Einstein didn't wear socks for that reason ..
thank goodness for mundane observations.
Posted 13 Years Ago
thank goodness for mundane observations.
big toe poking through
everything needs some freedom
ah, breathe that fresh air
Hope you don't mind that I answered your senryu with one of my own. Just couldn't help myself.
Posted 13 Years Ago
big toe poking through
everything needs some freedom
ah, breathe that fresh air
Hope you don't mind that I answered your senryu with one of my own. Just couldn't help myself.
I hate that sock, it always finds me on the most inconvenient days, I've been known to lose socks like that mid-work shift, my patience isn't very good some days
Posted 13 Years Ago
I hate that sock, it always finds me on the most inconvenient days, I've been known to lose socks like that mid-work shift, my patience isn't very good some days
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Added on April 27, 2011
Last Updated on April 27, 2011
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Jeff Loquist Baton Rouge, LA
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