rainbow puddles
A Poem by
Jeff Loquist
...
the sky opened for a moment and spilled moonlight on puddles making rainbows against dark water and I smiled when the sky closed hiding rainbows that I guess were meant for my eyes only
© 2010 Jeff Loquist
Reviews
So short, but so beautiful and atmospheric. I love it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I often experience a moment of wonder such as this and I feel as if it were meant for me alone...a message from the sky, from nature itself.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I often experience a moment of wonder such as this and I feel as if it were meant for me alone...a message from the sky, from nature itself.
emily
said
it
all
oh
so
beautifully
Posted 14 Years Ago
emily
said
it
all
oh
so
beautifully
such enchantment~ magikal inside the smile of delight framed by innocence always there for us to catch with a simple step outside the frame with arms stretched to the wonders of the world~
Posted 14 Years Ago
such enchantment~ magikal inside the smile of delight framed by innocence always there for us to catch with a simple step outside the frame with arms stretched to the wonders of the world~
for your eyes and the moon and the rainbows
maybe you needed that smile
not everybody that writes poetry understands the power of the word, but you do
Posted 14 Years Ago
for your eyes and the moon and the rainbows
maybe you needed that smile
not everybody that writes poetry understands the power of the word, but you do
Stats
453 Views
6 Reviews
Added on November 4, 2010
Last Updated on November 4, 2010
Author
Jeff Loquist Baton Rouge, LA
About
Writer, photographer, artist, old, tired, medicated (sometimes), irritated, (most times)
more..
Writing
Related Writing
People who liked this story also liked..