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A Poem by Jeff Loquist

Outside my window
the world continues to die
as I lay silent

© 2010 Jeff Loquist


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I love how you can describe so much, in so few words.
This is really haunting yet brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In three lines you managed to create quite the deep story..
painful, raw, honest. very well done.. yes..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simply put, and straight to the point. I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2010
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Jeff Loquist
Jeff Loquist

Baton Rouge, LA



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