Friendship, Love, and Happiness

Three dreams that never came true...
Three dreams that never will come true...

Author's Note

Don't worry, I'm fine...

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

wow, for some reason, the title with that one simple line was very powerful and emotional for me. In all honesty I think this was written simply, cleverly, and perfectly. So sad, yet the tone seems some how apathetic, as if used to the idea. Well done. I have to give you a 100 for this one..just so unique ona originally written!
God Bless
~Mickey

[The Watcher]

Thanks...

[FateDictates]

because you still have those dreams........yes you will be fine..:)

[Kenaz]

Yes, so powerful. I read your about section and (without sounding as if I know what you are going through) it felt eerily similar to my experiences.

[The Watcher]

Thank you...

[Pax]

this is just very sad. short and speaks volume. You know friendship is easy to attain but love and happiness takes hard work that i know you can. Brilliant words in such short manner just the way i liked it.

[Admiral Kirk]

Aw, that's so sad... For two lines, this is a very powerful piece. It delivers this sort of punch in the stomach... But a light punch, more of a shove... A shove that knocks you backward into the truth, and drowns you in sorrow, swallowing you up into a never ending pit of darkness... A very light shove, however.

[The Watcher]

Thanks Jennifer...

[Admiral Kirk]

You're welcome!

[Pi Cee]

Just because you haven't thoughts you've been happy before, just because you haven't taken notice to the type of people you'd consider friends, doesn't mean you come across it soon. Love's a different story and my opinions and thoughts on that are too long for a review, but I think you're setting yourself up to fall here hon, dooming any optimism you might come across when it comes to these subjects because you have a past. But having a past, and having regrets can actually get you further because you've learned some things other people haven't and used in the right way gets you respect, value, admiration. Note that I don't know how to do that myself, but I have a very strong feeling, almost knowledge that it is entirely possible.

Powerful lines.

[The Watcher]

Thank you Bri...