Knot

Knot

A Poem by Jamie Lee

The ends hang frayed, lifeless

Creeping up to the

knot that holds tight -

keeping it's rigid form.

It intertwines in an elaborate

lybrinth, weaving in and out

like a wounded soldier rushing

to his fallen comrade.

So simple to the eye, yet

impossible for the mind.

© 2010 Jamie Lee


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"like a wounded soldier rushing
to his fallen comrade.
So simple to the eye, yet
impossible for the mind."
(great simile & a gorgeous poem)
~~very creative~~

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 21, 2010
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Jamie Lee
Jamie Lee

Santa Cruz, CA



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