And I.....

And I.....

A Poem by Hotaru

I beg you FORGIVE me
'Cause I forgot the old me
Because I wasn't the one to be
And I've changed, but you'll see
I beg you FEEL me 
Know the reason why i flee
How afraid I was to ever see
The world that wounded me badly
And I, beg you FORGET me
If you can't accept the new me
'Cause all I need is for you to see 
Who I am, love me for who i'll be

© 2012 Hotaru


Author's Note

Hotaru
it's just so sad to accept the fact that he couldn't accept the new me...

:"((

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Beautiful yet oh so depressing and incredibly lonely, little poem. Being accepted is hard because overtime you do grow and change, into someone more that someone might not appreciate as much. Still all you can do is endure and hope things come around for the better, so much can change. They might change and understand how you feel in time... well penned, emotional poem indeed ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this poem! Not being accepted for who you are is incredibly hard, but if they can't accept you..than they are not worthy of being in your life. Surround yourself with people you can be yourself around and they love you all the same :)
Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I can feel your pain. It's sad and lonley. Hope u get past it. 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hotaru

12 Years Ago

thank u so much.. :))
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12 Years Ago

you're welcome! :)
This is a poem I can well relate on...
Don't give up because for every person a buddy is born... you've a lot of friends but maybe you forget that they're there or maybe they forgot that you feel hurt for what they say...
Be happy, live life to the fullest, best wishes (;
and well keep writing (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hotaru

12 Years Ago

thanks rhianne.. :)
Acceptance really is hard :'(

Stay strong and remember there are still friends that treasure maybe not yet the real you but at least partially. :)

Regarding the poem,
I like the deep emotional intensity but I see some typos, go over those. In your first stanza I feel like the third line is missing the intensity of the rest of the stanza

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hotaru

12 Years Ago

thanks.. :))
Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

welcome

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Hotaru
Hotaru

Baguio City, Philippines



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hi!... I`m a fourteen year old highschool student... i write poems about love usually, i am sweet, friendly, i love animes, and music. I like singing, dancing and playing guitar. I love GOD more..

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