Woebegone

She stared at the sunset sadly

On a terrace she watched carefully

Reminiscing the past painfully

Remembering, but trying to set free

Over again she bowed her head sorrowfully

While her tears fell slowly 

Author's Note

this is my second poem... :DD
and i wrote this because it describes my feeling.... a lot... uhmmm... pls. ignore the wrong grammars.. LOL... thanks ",

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

Thankyou for writing such a beautiful poem.

[Hotaru]

thank u :)

[Hidden Happiness]

Its really really easy to ignore grammar when you write a poem so beautiful:-):-):-D.

[Hidden Happiness]

Its really really easy to ignore grammar when you write a poem so beautiful:-):-):-D.

[Ruby]

It's really good keep writing more 100/100

[White_lily]

really good, keep up the good work ;)

[Hotaru]

thanks.. :DD

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Aww that's beautiful...sad but gorgeous!!!!

[Hotaru]

thank u.. :))

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Wahahahaaha brings back memories :3

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Absolutely gorgeus never chnage a thing! lol and thats really god let me tell you I rarely say that! of course I suck at grammer to but as far as the actual poem its spotless!

[LJB]

This is lovely! Your emotions really come across strongly in this. Good job!

[Hotaru]

thanks.. :D