Love, please stop hurting me.

Love, please stop hurting me.

A Poem by Ashley
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the poem says it all... I miss him.

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I do not feel anything but depression
I do not feel angry nor happiness
I do not even feel scared when someone or something scares me.

Randomly you said we should be, "Just friends."
Because you are in love with a stripper instead.

WHAT!?
She will never, ever, love you like how I do
Your lies are making my pain grow even stronger
I do not even want to breathe your breath, when you talk about her.

You do not make any sense, yet I'm still in love with you
I cry watching depressing movies
I yell out the words perfectly to mopy love songs
Even when I keep busy being miserable,
Everything I do makes me think of you, your smell, and your touch.

You have me feeling depressed
I cannot even drive without almost getting into an accident
I have lost control over myself, if you are not near me.

How can you tell me you love me, then suddenly leave me?
Why won't you talk to me?
When will you come back?

Can't you see that I'm obsessively, passionately waiting for you?
What am I supposed to do without you?
How does one simply move on?
I need you to come running back to me... right now!!!! Please? Pretty please?

Oh s****y feelings, people say, "Just don't give a f**k!"
Well how can I NOT care about someone who I used to love, so deeply?

This is too difficult for me to even try to understand
Yet, why am I still making myself go insane over you?




© 2012 Ashley


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A great, but very sad read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know how you feel about it. It is a deep poem that I can relate to. It really is a sad thing when someone you love more than anything leaves and never comes back. You feel empty and sad, but you WILL find someone new. I know it.

:D



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful written .....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A poem with a sad tale. People make the wrong decisions and sometime best to let them go. A gift of love is a precious gift not to be wasted on a useless person. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good emotional poem. It sucks when we have to be in pain to write better...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is painful..... Reminds me of my ex.... Men are a******s.... >.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart achingly powerful write. The hurt flows throught his. powerful write i can relate to. Excellent work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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